hi
i enjoyed every story
it's really something special

Sam

Thank you very much.

Re: Head Librarian

It's almost like the time I went to library after school. God it brought back such stimulating memories. Thank you

Bobbiejo

Not a problem... read more!

Re: Bootycall

comments = Hay

Michael

Haha, I get it.

Re: Nancy Series

comments = Hi Vivianna,

I am a new fan of your writing and your site... I'm also a huge fan of the picture you have under the story "Conner's Training" in the Nancy Series...

I'd love a copy of it, if at all possible? We could trade something interesting, I'm sure...

David

The Nancy Series was developed for fetishists. Those stories were very hard to write. You don't need to trade anything with me. Thanks for writing.

Re: Head Librarian

comments = Enjoy your style and most story lines. Having known several *upstanding* women who have been either bi or lesbian I can appreciate The Head Librarian. Is there a continuation? Yes a person can seduce or turn another person as quickly as the librarian did. As you showed, it is not the length of time, but the desire and the ability to create the desire at that moment. The librarian was so smooth and confidant. Brings back many memories of a close friend of many years who got me accepted by a large lesbian population in Wash., D. C. Thank you. An old man with an active open mind that has had many years to develop.

femophile

Your observations are correct, the mood can be quickly developed. Alas, there will not be a sequel, but some characters may pop up in other stories.

Re: Comments

comments = I'm intigued as to why you would want comments. What is it exactly you are wanting to know?
My comments would depend on what I am looking for, which is a particular style of erotic writing.
If your particular style of writing feels good for you then continue and don't concern yourself with what others would say.

Lyn

Since I don't have an editor or a publisher, I solicit my audience for feedback.

Re: My First Anal

comments = You said that the anal story was your most popular, I can see why, from a bloke's point of view there is nothing more inviting than a nice tight ass. It all seems a little nasty and naughty, doesnt it ?
I have had the pleasure of sinking my cock into a lot of beautiful tight asses after the ladies involved have become used to the normal lovemaking procedure, they have all saved it as something special for themselves and their man, there is nothing like it, is there??
The feeling of sticking your dick into something so tight blows me away, the trust that is involved is also very personal. It's like the lady is giving you something very special indeed, and I guess she is eh?? But surely it's the naughtiness of it that makes it so appealing, can you tell me please the difference between anal and vaginal penetration, I can't imagine that it would be too much difference as there isn't much between there......is there, look foward to your reply

Georgie

No Difference? You have to be kidding. I won't get into it here, but there is a world of difference.

Re: Head Librarian

comments = Extremely well written and a little quick to the "point" (but then who wants to wait 22 minutes).

appreciative

Thanks and I am glad you liked it. I wouldn't wanted to wait either.

Re: The Site

comments = VERRRY nice,LOL

Thomas

Thank you VERRRY much,LOL

Re: The Site

comments = Your writing and the writing of our visitors are quite good. My libido has definitely been stimulated. Thanks.

John

You are very welcome. Your comments are the reason I write. These stories are for YOU; my audience.

Re: The Site

comments = Hi there, just popping by to see what's new with you. See that your as usual up to hot, and wild things;-) WIll send you a Fourth of July story soon hope you enjoy it and your readers as well. Maggie

Maggie

Maggie, thanks for coming. As for your stories, I know that they will enjoy it :P

Re: The Site

comments = Very informative site. I promise to come back. :)

Will

Hope you've learned a great deal from my site. I try to be informative.

Re: The Site

comments = I must add my voice to the din. Very erotic, well structured and inviting to read. May I ask was any of the photos of you? If not is there a photo of you available?

George

Thank you for dropping me a line. Some say that a picture is worth a thousand words. I don't.

Re: Suburbia Series

comments = Hey Suburbia was never like that when I lived there and now the farm isn't either;-) Loved it, as I do all your stuff. Just wanted you to know I come and visit regularly.

Maggie

Hi Maggie, I am so glad you liked it. It isn't like that here either, but we can fantasize.

Re: Charles' Story

comments = Charles, that was sultry hot! You should do more erotic short stories. Very nice....

Lizette

Yes indeed, his story is "Sultry Hot".

Re: My First Anal

comments = Great story, so funny thats how an ex told me she had her first anal experience, except it was a carrot. I'll have to show her this story! Thanks.

Travis

You are very welcome. A carrot? Her eyesight must be fantastic!

Re: My First Anal

comments = superb story. love the pics!

Wanker

Thank you. I thought the pictures would add to the tale.

Re: My First Anal

comments = I think you did a wonderful job on this story. It was an interesting topic, easy to read, and held my interest. My only complaint is that it was too short. Perhaps while she is recovering from her first anal orgasm she could be interruped by the neighbor lady, who is bi and had her eye on this young lady for a long time. Then take it from there.

Roho

Hmmmmmmmmm... sounds like a very yummy idea. But, alas no, I will not do it. This piece was meant as a "solo" piece about an awakening, an epiphaneous event if you must.

Re: The Site

comments = Your Canadian roots are showing. Erin Mills and Dan Hill!

Thanks for your good stories

George

I am trying hard at the Canadian thing. You are a sharp, seems like you pick up on it. I am Canadian through and through and very proud of it. Eh? For the record, Dan Hill is not, I repeat NOT a favorite singer of mine.

Re: His/her private passion

comments = i like to lick ring holes for fun but does it make my breath smell?

Butt Kiss

You tell me.

Re: The Site

comments = At last a real woman who writes 'dirty' stories so well and so sensual. You make me so 'horny' Vivian. My boyfriend lives a long way off (in ***********) and when we meet we have great fun doing many of the 'things' in your stories. Some years ago I made a number of 'amateur' adult movies for a company in ******** Fl. One was called 'Anal Gangbang' which needs no explanation as to the content!! I did enjoy making them but that was over ten years ago and my body is not as good as it was then!

Please keep writing

Love

******

You have certainly led the storied life. I wish I had as much "guts" as you. Thank you for all your kind compliments, you're making me blush. And yes, I will keep writing.

Re: Knee Deep in Suburbia

comments = Love your "Knee Deep" series - since I live in a cookie cutter subdivision in *********** myself and do my best to appear very boring to all my neigbours.
Anyway, a couple of story ideas that I haven't seen posted - based on what a group of us did in the 70's - Jane decides to get fucked in every room in the house, then get fucked in them while other people are in the house and unaware of what she's doing. Jane gets boring and fucks her way through the alphabet in order (Alan, Benny, Collin, Derek etc...) - all the while she continues to interact with Erin and Dan but NOT sexually ... hold the reader to the idea that she will on the next page but then never quite let it get there.
All the time, Jane is willing to be involved with either (or both) of them, and they are with her but they never get to the point where Erin/Dan are actually willing to discuss it (very real life) with Jane (who meanwhile is mercilessly plundering the neighbourhood in alphabetical order).
I like the stories - you're improving and have a delicious sense of humour - you sound like a really nice person from reading in between the lines.
Mr.Ed

These are very interesting ideas, but I cannot guarantee that your scenarios will happen. Maybe I'll start a novel. "The Alphabetization of Jane". There will be a new installment soon. Stay tuned!

Re: The site

Hi There

Nice story, do you like stories with male gender in mind ??
If you do I will give you some strong pointers.

Bye 4 Now
SX

Sorry, I don't get into that genre. I have no reference points.

Re: What I Did Last Summer

I really liked the two stories I read, particularly "What I Did Last Summer".

Thank you.
Charles

Thank you and please visit again.

Re: This Site

Many thanks for sharing your thoughts. Love your stories, and will, if you pardon the pun, come again and again.

Love and peace
Jon

Such kind words. I do want you to *come* again and hopefully, your next visit will be as rewarding as your last ;-)

Re: Maggie's Pages

The site is looking better and better Loose Lucy leaves me beyond words ;-) I love your ramblings and am about to go read some more. The latest story came out great. Thanks for making it look so good. I am glad to see the comments thing on the bottom I hope to see how others on the site like my work. Looking forward to it. Here is one for you or you can put it up on site if you want. I wrote it for a friend. Enjoy the wet panties;-)

Maggie

It's always great to hear from you Maggie and I'm glad that you like the new layout of the site. Your stories are jewels in this site and always HOT. Wet panties are guaranteed with your stories. Readers, please go to Visitor's Submissions to get ALL of Maggie's goodies.

Re: The Site

Hey Viv,

Just found your site, definitely enjoying it. (both in the *ahem* literal and also the literary sense ;-) ).

I've read a couple of the stories so far, (My First Anal, Lust in the Showers, I Was Infected, Ramblings of a Smut Writer. . .) and enjoyed them all. I definitely like the humor aspect. Heck, other than an orgasm, what's better than a good laugh? Admittedly they don't often come together. . . (I find that laughing in bed with a naked person is usually frowned upon) but hey, it's still something to shoot for.

My only constructive criticism is that I most enjoyed the first person/semi-autobiographical stories (Infected, Anal, etc.). I felt you were at your best when I, the *ahem* appreciative audience, was thinking "Did she really do that?"

The more wild and out there stuff is always interesting, but the realism (even if it's only imagined) is definitely what got my attention the most :-). If you are ever up for it, I'd definitely try posting an actual admitted 'real life' story. We've all got them, and they can be more fun, and more exciting, then the the '18 inches of rockhard man-flesh plunged into her dripping moist love-hole' variety.

Keep up the good work, :-)

--Pluto

I am very glad you liked these stories. As for laughing in bed; it does indeed go together. I thought I did stop the "pulsing manhood thrusting into my passion filled nest of goo" type of writing. If I didn't... oh well...

Re: My First Anal Experience

loved your story re ass fucking. Can't wait for the next one using a cock.

The Judge

Thanks. Try other stories on this site, you'll surprised how much *ass f***ing* goes on in here.

Re: My First Anal Experience

the story had me stroking and flicking in no time...my 1st time, and many times after, was with my dog....but that is another story

joey/joeie

Hope you had a great time with it. Here boy... Here boy... That's a good boy... WOOF!

Re: Story by S Savin

story requires more detail otherwise "great".

egbert

Mr. Savin, if you read this, please comment. I thought the story was quite erotic and well written.

Re: Site

Just found it looks like i will enjoy. Keep up the good work

C.W.

Thanks C.W. It's hardly any *work* at all.

Re: Ramblings of a Smut Writer

Hi Vivianna,

I loved your ramblings! I'm afraid I don't have any useful words for you (tool, pole, honey-pot, luv bush don't really qualify as original).

I have also had the experience of reading stuff I've written and laughing out loud at the sheer silly/over-the-toplessness of what I've committed. People like us should have our pens taken away! No, on the other hand, what is worse than tasteful smut?

I look forward to your next galloping orgasm, borne to me on a wave of textual cum!!

Tom Thumper

ps: Of course, men cum more!!!

Thanks Tom, humor is a big ingredient in some of my pieces. Try out Tom's site here at ASSTR: Tom Thumper's Site. No Tom, women cum more.

Re: Brian's Stories

Very good story - well written.

Bob

Brian will be glad to hear this.

Re: What I Did on My Summer Vacation(?)

Very hot. I loved the background pictures, they add to the excitement.

Dee

I am assuming that you are referring to What I Did on My Summer Vacation. That was the last piece I produced with a background. I'm overjoyed that you liked it and hope you got a chuckle out of the humour I injected into it.

Re: Nancy Series

When's the next installment going to be posted? Or did you lose interest?

rhythmatist

Alas, I have run out of ideas and would do a disservice to the Nancy Series if I were to attempt any more scribblings. Unless I get some fresh ideas, Nancy and her friends will remain retired.

Re: Porno Theater Adventure - Guy

Loved the story but assume the abupt ending means there is more. I sure hope so, Where can I find "the rest of the story"

Thank you
Dick

I am glad you liked it. I really don't think there will be an ending for this one, as I have lost touch with Guy. Use your own imagination!!!

Re: A Fantasy by Charles

I love the descriptive nature of his observations, highly erotic without being smutty. Thank you--now finish the story PLEASE.

Dick

Charles will be quite happy to hear that you enjoyed his story so much. As for finishing it, it will be up to him. Charles?????

Re: My First Anal Experience, Booty call

I found your site and this was the first story I read..and loved it..(and some day I will have to share my first anal experience with you...my first time using an object in my ass)
Then I read Booty call..and loved that one as well.... I will definately be back to read more of your hot stories....
You sure know how to excite a man..and I was hard as I read your two stories.... now I need more...*g*

Thanks for sharing and be baddddd

Kisses and Licks
Al

I'll be waiting for your story and please come back. There are a lot of stories here and more to come!

Re: Site

I found your page and read some of your stories..and LOVED them!!!..HOt..and HOTTER...and what a nice touch you have with words..and how exciting your stories are...
I am glad I found you and I will be visiting often :-))))

Kisses
Al

Thank you very much, I hope you come back real soon.

Re: Site

comments = some strap-on sex - racer

Have you read "Looking In - Part 2 (A Tutorial in How to Be a Girl)" or in the "Nancy Series" - "Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 2 Are You Man Enough?", "Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 8 I Would Be Honored", "Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 10 Vaginal Size Training"? A plethora of strap on fun in these stories. If you wanted to see some in "The Orgy", please write it yourself!

Re: Games Page, Site

comments = Great as ever. ALways a pleasure to take time to browse the stories and giggle at the games Loved the picture of your very composed lady. Not sure I could manage to look so unruffled ;-)

Maggie

Always great to hear from you Maggie, this site is all the more better with your contributions. I graciously thank you!!!

Re: Games page

comments = I'll volunteer to lick Kitty and Buddy anytime.

Teaboy

Ha ha. Stand in line.
* Note: I pulled that game off the site, I'm trying to run a classy joint.

Re: What I did on My Summer Vacation

Loved the Summer Vacation story. All that on the first day at the resort? What about the rest of the vacation? It was very well written.

I am very happy you liked it. I don't think there will be a sequel. However, never say never.

Re: I was Infected

comments = I was online searching for aome antivirus for my infected PC and I click on your link "I was Infected" and hoping that I can downloaded some antivirus and I start reading the article and to my suprise, the erotic article is good and I kept reading it until I totally forgot about the virus. Keep up the good work......
David

Hope your PC is okay. Viruses (virii??) are the worst. They are created by dollar programmers with no talent who have visions of false greatness. They accomplish nothing.

Re: Booty Call

Reminds me of the first time. I was the uninitiated, but I felt like the master.
Chris

Ahh! Sweet memories, lucky you.

Re: Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 10 - Vaginal Size Training

Viv,
This chapter really raises the bar in the quality of your stories. It was very hot and seemed much more real.

I think adding the emotional elements really heightened the excitement generated.

Kudos
the rhythmatist

Re: Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 9 - Tributes To My Mistress

Viv
A self shaving. I hadn't expected that, nice twist. Extra kudos for the herbal shaving oil! and mentioning the long brown hair blowing in the breeze. Will Nance ever give V directions on how to wear it, or modify it?
the rhythmatist

Yes, these will be forthcoming. Thank you.

Re:

Viv,
Your stories are just what I am looking for, because I am very sex hungry and your stories really get me very horny, and when I masterbate the surge is sooo sweet. Your sexual stories are great.

Thanks
H

Please turn away from your monitor when you 'blow your load'. HeeHee. Thanks for coming, hope you come again! Honestly, I am really happy you enjoyed my stories.

Re:

send me yr sexy stories everyday... l love to read
it....i m enjoying very much...myself..to read..it.

thnks.

Sorry, I don't send out stories. You can always come back and visit this site! I update it frequently.

Re: Head Librarian

I just read Head Librarian and laughed so much. You really have a way of making a humorous story extremely sexy. Being seduced by an older woman has always been one of my fantasies and by reading this story, my fantasy has been rekindled. Thank you so much for your stories, you have a knack for building a story and taking your readers with you.
I love your site!
Karen

Thank you Karen for your heartfelt kindness. I try my best. I won't profess to be one of the better writers but I enjoy what I do and hope that my site can bring some happiness to others. Simply stated, I'm having fun and I want to spread the wealth!

Re: Lust in the Showers

I've read a few of your stories and I've quite enjoyed them. I think that what I like best is the breathless nature of the story - in lust in the showers you can feel the body take over the mind. I love that feeling and I think you've captured it beautifully here.

I noticed the happy canada day note in your 'news' and the bio.

Where abouts you from - I'm toronto myself.

J

Thank you for your kind words.
Yes I am Canadian from Ontario and the G.T.A. (which would be situated in Southwestern Ontario, I think, any geography majors out there?) That's all I'll say. You could say that I'm just a bit patriotic.

Re:

Viv, I've enjoyed visiting your site immensely. You are a very talented writer who knows how to draw your readers in and allow them to share through their imaginations the emotions and feelings in your stories. Thanks for sharing!!!

Charles

Thank you for your sweet comments. I still have doubts about my abilities as a writer. I consider myself more of a *gasp* "spewer of stroke stories". But, alas, I try.

Re: Lust in the Showers

hey viv i just wanted to write and say how much I liked the way you set up the story "Lust in the shower." The background and story goes along with eachother. Again great work.

Kevin

P.s. just wondering do u have a pic of yourself? Just want to put a face with the story writer.

Thanks, the story was inspired by a picture sent to me by one of my readers. Sorry, no picture of me at this time. (I'm extrovertly introverted)

Re: I am Canadian!

Congrats on the great stories!
One question though, where in Canada are you from?

Harvey

You are much too kind, thanks. I'm from Southwestern Ontario. Canada Rocks! eh?

Re: I really enjoy your writings

Keep up the GOOD work. Your stories are so believable!

Hank

I'm blushing! Really, I am. Thank you and please come again.

Re: My Experiment

This is a well written story. I wish I was there;-) I really enjoyed it!
What else have you written?

Hank

Thank you. If you want to read other pieces, please visit my site:
http//:www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/vivianna/www

Re: The Nancy Series

When is the next installment due?

I will try for the beginning of the week of June 10, 2003, but please don't hold me to it, I'm dealing with a lot of research and new ideas to make the next one special.

Re: He Was Big, My Experiment

Hi,

I took a short dip into two of your shorter pieces and loved them!
The cocksucking in He Was Big was especially tasty, and the exhibitionism in My Experiment was extremely hot, very satisfying!
Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories!
Tom

Thank you for your kind comments, hope you visit again.

Re: Nancy Series

Cool site! Love the Nancy stories.

Lark

Thank you. There will be more installments soon.

Re: A Tutorial on How to Be a Girl

Hey where's the story "A Tutorial on How to Be a Girl" ? The title is great and I'd love to read it.

Anonymous

I renamed it "Looking In - Part 2" a couple of months ago. The original title has been re-introduced, you can find it on the 'Fiction' page.

Re: Nancy Series

Glad to hear your survived the computer virus.
Any estimate for publishing the next chapter in the "Nancy" series?
Women who have clit piercings generally say it increases their sensitivity and general arousal because they are constantly reminded its there.
Good luck with your stories.

rhythmatist

Thanks, I will try to get another installment out as soon as possible. I don't know about the clittie piercing though.

Re:

My pussy's all wet from reading your stories, especially the librarian one. What am I going to do?

Phoebe

Why don't you swing over here and I'll do something about it. ;-) But since that won't work, let me suggest this. Extend index finger, place it on ... (So sorry, I'm getting carried away). I'm glad you liked it.

Re:

Lucky for you. Your computer is okay. Great stories, will visit again. Bye.

Ron

Thank you for caring. I hope to see you soon.

Re: Lust in the Showers

Oh man what a story you might even make an exercise nut out of me if the rewards could be that heavenly. Great job and the site is looking even better. Sorry about the virus that does indeed suck and in a totally bad way.

Maggie

Thank you Maggie, my computer is fine. I'm glad you enjoyed that story. By the way, your works are great! My scribbles pale in comparaison to your stories.

Re: Enchanted, I am Enslaved

Good story, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I would like to see more submission on your part. I will wait for the next story.

Ogre89

You won't have to wait long, a new installment is in the works.

Re: Lust in the Showers

That story was so hot and the pictures were great. I want to do you in the shower.

Stevie B.

Stevie! I hardly know you, but thanks for thinking about me. ;-)

Re: Enchanted, I am Enslaved

Dear Vivianna,

Good story. Will you continue in this vein?

Are the piercings V received in this installment permanent? I think a description onf the size and style is in order. And definitely have V describe how the piercings make her feel. Will V ever receive a clit piercing to accompany her labial piercing?

And don't you think a good submissive would have her public hair shaved, at the very least? Especially now that she is pierced. Some of us go the laser route to enjoy being smooth permanently, others enjoy the intimacy of being shaved by our partners.

From where did your inspiration for this story come? And if you've never been smooth I would highly recommend it.

the rhythmatist

VERY GOOD suggestions. I will be using this advice in my next installment to the Nancy Series. My inspiration came from other erotic writings and I wanted to try this genre.

Re: Enchanted, I am Enslaved

Thank you, this was what I was referring to in my previous email. Your submission is more highly prized than your other character - Conner.

Licentious

I am happy you liked it, I wrote it in response to feedback for 'Conner's Training'.

Re:

(Received in the Morning)

Thanks Viv
You made My Pussy cum 3 xs
this morning
thank you

Portia 27 nice clit tits and ass

(Received in the Afternoon)

Thank you again 2 more times
Do you get yourself hot like this too

I needed it so bad. Kisses

Portia 2

Glad to be of service. Ladies and Gentlemen, this is why I write these naughty little stories.

Re: My First Anal Experience

Was this true? I was thinking of your smooth young body on your bed as you fucked yourself in the ass. Do you like ass fucking? I love it. I have fucked women's asses and would like to fuck your ass.

Asher

Asher, could you be more specific? ;-) Do you think this story is true? Maybe, maybe not.

Re: Conner's Training

The male submissive story was good. Can you please write about a female submissive?

Lark

I am in the process of writing one. Please visit soon as it will be posted shortly.

Re:

Hey Baby, your stories are so hot. You make me cum.

RadDude

I hope you could get all your *stuff* off your keyboard.

Re: Conner's Training

Some parts were quite unrealistic. How would a man let you do these things to him. Nice picture.

Shreveport

Believe me, there are people out there that are like that. And there's nothing wrong with it.

Re: Conner's Training

As a Male Dom, I would like to have you as my sub. As for your treatment of Conner, I was aghast at your lack of respect for your Mistress. Nancy must train you well. You must NEVER disrespect her in any way or form in front of other subs. My remedy for this lapse in judgement is for you to be subjected to some training.

Licentious

Me? You must be kidding. Honestly, it gives me a good idea. I'll do a little research and put something together. Thank you for the suggestion

Re:

Cool site. I don't know which way you're gonna swing from story to story. Doesn't matter, they are all sexy. Makes me very horny at night. Would like to see some m/m. Cool pics.

Lana

I don't even know which way the story will sway. Making you horny is what I do best, Hope you had a good time! Sorry hun, can't do M/M, I wouldn't know where to start.

Re: Corporate Me

'Corporate Me' was hilarious. Made me laugh. Great Site.

Ward

I really had a fun time writing it. I am really glad you liked it. Thanks

Re: Nancy, What Will We Do Tonight, Part 1 - The Introduction

I haven't read the stories yet. But I liked the pic on the side of the first installment, I'll write again after reading them. Thanks

Big 8

What are you waiting for?

Re: A Tutorial on How to Be a Girl

I saw your site on the ASSTR New Authors page, and read "A Tutorial on How to Be a Girl." I love the title, and I thought the beginning was excellent. That tone of casualness about doing extreme stuff is something I try to use in my own stories. The rest of it felt pretty routine, though--like a penthouse letter.

It was interesting enough that I'll definitely be looking at more of your work later.

Vinnie

Hey! My stories are better than a Penthouse Letters. ;-) I must admit that I do get a bit carried away at times. But that's just what I do.