Reviews for Teenager's Pedophilia Feeling, Part 1

Gracchus

04/12/06 (4 Stars)

This introductory chapter has much potential, despite the author's lack of confidence. It shall be interesting to see what happens next.

daddy dan

04/06/06 (4 Stars)

It's good, except the constant apologies get annoying. Just write it and let us critique.

FunForHere

04/05/06 (3 Stars)

Good story and well told. We begin to get a sense of the character of Franni - she feels like a real person.