Reviews for Oops!!


Jeffrey

07/06/07 (4 Stars)

Oops! Does Jack ever go back? What more do they teach him? Does he develope a romance with Ann? That shy /innocent stuff of theirs is so pretty! Please allow Jack to become sexually involved with one or more of the girls in a non-painful manner. Well, at least no injury. How about all the little girls pleasure Jack after mistakenly abused him(?) Shw us (with your words) each child. Head to toe-- give a good description of each. Even comparing one child's features to another's... Keep up the good work!


little blue

05/26/06 (5 Stars)

WOW. You actually read my comments on the last story. This one was a pleasure to read. Thanks


Gracchus

05/26/06 (5 Stars)

A WONDERFUL story, even if the characters know too much for their age. But that's fantasy. Successive stories might introduce some other friends. And lots more helplessly tied up naked kids. I give it five stars!