Reviews for The Tie-Up Club, Part 26

04/16/06

I am really torn writing this review. The story deserves 5 stars, if it was not for the numerous grammatical and spelling error and the inconsistencies (specially with names like when talking about Mindy). Wizbang, please consider having some one edit you stories before publishing them. The spelling and grammatical error and inconsistencies really distract the reader (at least this reader) from what is otherwise the best story of this series, and one of the best stories I have read overall. I do understand that the subject deal with small kids, but they are not narrating the story. When the small kids are talking, the spelling and grammatical error should be there, since they are consistent with their age and the way they speak, but not for the narration itself or when the older characters speak.

Please do not misunderstand my criticism. You are a very talented writer, one of the best. But all writers, no matter how good they are, need the services of a good editor.

sister

03/19/06

Great! no less!