john

09/19/07

I just read parts 1, 2 and 3 and that was one of the hottest stories that I have read in years. Please write more. I would love it if you took things up a notch or two. Perhaps a rattlesnake or cobra or other poisonous creature could be used. Perhaps a whole nest of hundreds of hornets stinging several screaming little children at once.

more please :)

Josh

04/21/05

Bloody hell... Very good mate, but i would have them stung some more...;)