Reviews for Breathtaking

Dirty Pleasure

12/10/05 (5 Stars)

cutting her air supply right when she orgasms, mmmmmm. Thx for a nice site I sooooo like depraved stories!!!!

donikka

08/13/05 (5 Stars)

*GASPING* this is fabulous -- thank you so much!!!

Mike

08/12/05 (5 Stars)

Really kind.
I love this story very very mutch.
Nothing better than a hanged little girl.

Masterius

08/11/05 (5 Stars)

Mmmmmmmmmm . . . --smiles--

Breathtaking . . . such a perfect name. Double entendre. --smiles-- I loved the imagery very much, and I can only imagine the skillful way Anna must have seduced, charmed and conditioned pretty little Maya into not just enduring, but looking forward to, both pain and fear.

It's clear that little Maya truly has no idea about things, but simply seeks approval from both Mommy and Anna as well as the good feelings Anna can give her. I love seeing the balance between, on one side, with fear and pain, and on the other with pleasure.

Very nicely done!

Zool

08/10/05 (5 Stars)

Long time since you last wrote a story V but this one was well worth waiting for! Loved the clothespins bit! OUCH! Full marks!

The Chrome Dinette

08/10/05 (3 Stars)

short, but very interesting
we enter in what would usually be the middle of the story where Maya has progressed from an innocent to a bondage slave, without that part of the story the reader must suspend disbelief and assume there was a believeable progression to get Maya to her present condition

only because the story was so well written did this reader spend the effort to assume that much that was unobserved had happened before this story opened

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