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Reviews for Alice in Rapeland, Part 1 John Maybury 03/10/07 So far the story is great. I love stories about little girls that will be fucked. If you can, let me know where the rest of the story is. Regards John Maybury 03/09/07 I think it is a good setup earglywaiting for the rest Wayne 03/09/07 Great start! You have some grammatical issues, you should have an editor look at it. Can't wait for chap 2. |
