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Reviews for Mike's Perversion george 05/09/06 love this story and i hope it continues....would love to have little Mikey naked and sucking my cock....maybe bring back Ty for a 2sum at a party at the XXX store....damn, i love yng hairless boys, esp black bow :-) Gyver 03/05/06 nice Zool 02/23/06 Very good for a first story. As Shakey said, the grammar needs a little tidying up but not much. Several writers can offer a proof reading service if you would like us to assist before you submit Shakey Psyche 02/22/06 A fairly good story. You need some work on grammar, though. Keep up the work; it'll pay off in the long run. I'd like to see where you take the story of Mike. |
