Reviews for A Long Day, Part 1

Phoenix

03/18/07 (4 Stars)

Pretty good, I liked it.

Croaker

02/23/06 (2 Stars)

An interesting concept marred by the author, an idiot who thinks a spell checker is equivalent to editing. For the record, its TONGUE (not tong) and MINISTRATIONS (not menstruations -- and this particular malaprop conjured a partticularly unsettling image). Additionally, the over repetative use of "maleness" got in the way.