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Reviews for The Last One ganman 05/27/07 great story will there be a follow up?? RexLear 12/06/05 Oh! What a twist!! Tanith 05/14/05 Um, lable this correctly. Its an interesting ending but was not only unexpected but unwanted. The story travles too quick and you lead the reader to something that does not happen. Glock 05/14/05 Average writing and an appaling theme. Little or no eroticism. I don't understand why was this story posted here. It belongs with stories on a crime web site. Zool 05/13/05 First rate! Sailor Gotland 05/11/05 Wonderful twist at the end! Lovely story, I really would like to read more of your work! MDraven 05/11/05 A little short, but understandbly why. I do ever so hope you continue this story. The idea of a preteen assassin using sex to get to her targets is a more than wonderful idea! Various Apostrophe 05/11/05 Wow was that an obvious and completely unsubtle ending. And not at all erotic. The Chrome Dinette 05/11/05 not a bad story, more than well written, just not my type of story. Christopher 05/10/05 Anyone who would use a child to kill like this is a piece of crap infinitely worse than the worst rapist in the world. I would hope that if this happened in real life, the person who trained her would be killed by the police. |
