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05/19/07

you should have the wasps sting her a couple more times before the rescuers find her in more painful places, and maybe have her fall halfway down the cliff face so the pain and view is more surrealistic.

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Erzieher

10/23/06

Mother Nature has many surprising faces. A big Hurray for Greenpeace :-)

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jimmy

10/23/06

wow, grt story please keep writing

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Chris

10/22/06

Very good story
where is part two?

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Geneviève Fontaine

10/22/06

Original, different and well-written. A refreshing read along the lines of science-fiction.

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Gracchus

10/22/06

A very imaginative and rather surprising story about a girl, alone, yet punished.