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Reviews for Hunting, Part 2 04/07/06 love the story, looking forward to next part donikka 04/07/06 ack -- ok I am hooked -- part three???? *begs* sister 04/06/06 you're right, it's a slow start indeed! Any case I like the way the story is going on. Hope something happened next time ;) laura 04/06/06 Hi Strictnruff! i love your story!! It's nice the way it is building slowly, i just wish each installment was longer. In other words, i want more! :) i like how calculating the male is and how much he is looking forward to humiliating & hurting little Heather. As a female, i love that the mom is involved. i mean, the most important part of the story to me is the male dominating the little female, whether it happens behind the mother's back or if there's even a mom involved, but this is a great storyline. Not a common enough one. i just love Heather being so scared & helpless, no one to turn to. (It would be funny if at some point near the end she ran to her real Daddy & he ended up perpetuating the abuse so she really felt defeated.) Maybe it's because i'm a female, but i really enjoy the psychological & emotional aspects of incest. i like how it is so everyday, inescapable & from people who 'love' her. i do still like some 'love' and kindness shown to her, if that's gone it just becomes like stranger rape. Like, once things start progressing, if he holds her on his lap & tells her what a good girl she is (so this wouldn't be a punishment kind of abuse), but while he's kissing her thin neck & shoulders he's caressing and then passionately pinching her little tiny titties. That way she is confused, feels some love towards this man she sometimes thinks cares about her, but she always ends up being used for his & her mom's pleasure. The fact that it's *all* for the boyfriend (& the mom's) psychological & sexual satisfaction is paramount. i love that she brought him into the house & keeps bringing him back. How does that make the little girl feel? Must add to the trapped feeling. Learned helplessness. It seems you like to move things slowly, maybe mom & boyfriend could be sitting together on the couch with little Heather standing close between his knees. mom could rub his cock, while it's still in his pants, and kiss his neck, encouraging him as he takes control, shaming the little girl, exposing and pinching her little breasts. Eventually, of course, the male would have to cum. Either the mom or little girl could take his cock out & he would shoot his cum all over her little bumps, even if they're still covered with some kind of transparent cloth. Maybe mom could remove the inner cloth on the nightgown? i love the little girl having to walk around exposed but not naked in front of the adults. Of course i can't wait until he starts using Heather more, penetrating her, getting the ultimate sexual satisfaction from that. Wherever it is you want to take the story, please just don't stop!!! :) You're really good with the details and it's hard to find stories like this with the emotional involvement you provide. |
