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Reviews for Teaching Stepdaughter, Part 1 10/20/06 a great start stepdaddy 09/23/06 I am the established and original authoer who uses the penname stepdaddy. Please select another moniker. I hope you keep writing -- I like the imagery, but if you don't mind, modify the name. Thanks. Gracchus 09/18/06 Nice introduction for a nice story. A girl taken by stepdaddy to a remote house and deprived of all clothing. The story ends abruptly after "daddy" establishes that he is in charge; hopefully, additional chapters will be forthcoming. Bubba 09/18/06 were is the rest Keysha 09/17/06 I really did enjoy it. I do want to hear more. Granite 09/17/06 A promising start, difficult to judge on the first few sentences. Well written, I cannot fault the punctuation. When Part Two is written I would like to read that joeie 09/17/06 I can relate to what is going on, though, just in my imagination because it never happened to me, but I am about her age and no longer virgin. Brother took care of that w my blessing. Now, on to chapter two....if I can find it. Jeffrey 09/17/06 Tempting... read more! friend 09/17/06 Give us more. |
