Ai

11/23/05

fine story indeed...interesting subject...please do write more stories..and especially about hanging little girls, you are a great story teller...please precide!

Echo

04/17/05

Nice story and good detail. Great touch about their names being similar. The girl wanted to see a naked boy but the blindfold stops her seeing her brother strip off - could there have been more made of her thinking about him being naked but not being able to see it? also, why the product placement for MOUSETRAP?