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Reviews for Boy Derek jj 04/25/06 Awesome. I love boy nipple torture. Please more and more. jonus 04/23/06 really great start but why let him go before you got to rest of him please write more. Beyden 04/12/06 Cool story. I hope you write some more with little Derek :) Gracchus 04/12/06 Short story of a man who "captures" a beautiful 10 year old boy and plays bondage games with him. The story cries for a longer plot and perhaps a second "capture" with more helplessness and nudity. Even so, it was very nicely described. I'll give it a "3" Scavenger 04/11/06 Not really a good story. You don't explain anything you did to Derek except play with his nipples. Would have preferred to know what you did to Derek. Also, need to proofread better. Many spelling mistakes, and no paragraphs (except for the two) to really differentiate among all the description and poor lack of dialog. |
