Reviews for Untitled, Part 1

JS

06/10/07 (3 Stars)

Has potential

Mike (UK Reader)

06/10/07 (5 Stars)

Although this story may not have any title do not let that put you off
this author "Raymond" has that magic touch of writing Lolita Erotic Fiction to turn you on at it's very best and leave you at the end of the first chapter just begging for more, more. (soon we hope)