Gracchus

09/18/06

This is a well written story, a little lacking so far in bondage, but with a very believable story line (for a fantasy, anyway) and wonderful descriptions. If the boy leaves his home with the man (hint hint) the succeeding chapters should be just as sweet

Shakey Pysche

09/17/06

Well written good story. One note; try to separate it into shorter paragraphs.