jon

10/12/05

Rough and raw and most enjoyable write more please, more focus on the boy's perspective learn to accept pain humilation and forced sexual encounters. Also younger boys would be nice maybe he (the boy) could be forced to find younger new play things for Kwame maybe the first of these younger boys could be his younger brothers and very young boy cousins then bringing new friends from the camp and beach. Older boy forced to rape and punish younger boys. Some ideas as I hope you continue to write.