Reviews for The Writer, the Mother and Her Daughter

alicia

12/29/05 (5 Stars)

Your story has made me ready to cum.

Amanda

05/12/05 (5 Stars)

This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Please continue to write about them. I give this story 5 stars!

Gary

04/27/05 (4 Stars)

One of the best stories on here.Hope to read some more.

CT

04/23/05 (4 Stars)

A very stimulating read

abc-Teach

04/21/05 (5 Stars)

Great story, I will have to read some more of your stories.

JS

04/21/05 (5 Stars)

Great story! Quiller is my favorite author on this site. More mother/daughter bondage stories like this one and "The Story of Little KK"! How about a sequel (or "Further Adventures of...") to this story?

Penny

04/20/05 (5 Stars)

Vintage Quiller: evenly paced, fascinating plot, excellent characterisation and wonderfully arousing. Makes you want to be there and join in the fun!

Speedy Spider

04/20/05 (4 Stars)

That title reminds me on Peter Greenaway move The Cook, the Thief, His Wife & Her Lover. It's pretty good, the story I mean. I can't fail to notice it's also somewhat autobiographical story, not as in the story plot but more your thoughts reflected in the Writer. I can imagine Lolita Bondage is the Publisher that you mentioned in the story.

The story moves quite nicely but I think you picked up the pace a little towards the end. The Daughter seems to be too familair/accepting of the new situation for a 13 year old. I also wished you described some of the Mother's fantasies about tying up her little girl ever since he was 4 years old. All in all, it's a nice story. I give it 4 stars.