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Reviews for Memory of Alex, Part 1 Teej 07/03/05 Geez, what can I say.. I just read the 2nd chapter to this story. I mean, what the heck, a story on THIS site making my eyes tear up? The emotions you let out in the first 1/4 of the 2nd chapter was not expected. The younger boys memories of his mom, their old house, and his older brothers outburst... the way you wrote of his tears, you are amazing. I don't like the extreme stuff on this site (no disrepsect to those who do, 'cuz I do like some mighty weird-ass kinks myself) but THIS story is exactly what I come here for. I just never expected to see such truly good, emotive writing! It may not be the hornyest story I've read, but I'm giving this a 4 out of 5 because every other writing element is executed so flawlessly. Congratulations on what SHOULD be a new classic of web fiction. Fisher 06/29/05 I have no problem believing this really happened. A very well-written, sensitive story. Stands out from the crowd. Jon 06/20/05 Alex needs to get even with little Jakey for ruining his fun at being bound. Have Alex tie Jakey up and torture his small little body and have the scene interupted by their father and his father's boss who catch the boys at their fun and decide to punish both boys with prolonged bondage, torture and sexual savagery. Their father's boss can bring into the fun his 7 young stepsons ages 4-9. |
