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Reviews for Summer Slave, Part 16 07/28/05 So glad you came back to it. I read it about 6 months ago and wondered why it just stoppen like it did. Just happened to see yesterday that some thing new was up. Hope you can stay with it this time. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it. phil perry 05/11/05 oh goody more of the best series on the site. my question is this after twerp is broken and trained as a house slave does she have a submisive, unemployed mother? Big_Boy 05/10/05 Wow! What a pleasent surprise to see another chaper after two years. Thanks AGR_ASS, it is if you read my previous review and saw how me and other appreciate your good and hard work. The Chrome Dinette 05/03/05 a long wait, a fine story. 04/30/05 A long-awaited chapter! Excellently written. Zool 04/28/05 Without doubt, the best (In my opiion) multi part story on this site. woodrow 04/28/05 Absolutely stunning, EXCELLENT story telling. I am SO glad that the author has returned after such a much regretted absence to continue I have been frantic to find out what happened next to twerp. Thanks abc-Teach 04/27/05 Excellent as usual, can't wait to read more. Sparetep 04/27/05 Can't wait to read about the "funner stuff". hacker642 04/26/05 It's great that you are finishing this story it is amasing. Keep up the good work Hache 04/26/05 This series is one of the best that anyone can find in this site. I¦m very glad to see that AGR_ASS is continuing it. gerry 04/26/05 Thanks for a great chapter. I'm sorry it's coming to an end but all things must. Grant 04/26/05 Great story, well written with excelent characters & well developed plot. Speedy Spider 04/26/05 This is agr_ass' classic Summer Slave as far as I'm concerned, rich on psychoanalysis of his subjects and the inner conflicts and struggles of the main character. Surprisingly, this chapter saw the absence of Courtney's mother. I thought it was an interesting take on events more so because little Courtney (bless her cruel little heart) decided to choke the living daylights out of poor Twerp. I like the idea and I would like to see it repeat in a greater extent sometime in the future. Breath control can be great fun but it would be wise for mommy to be present just in case. Perhaps Twerpy would like to be trained in deep throating at some point down the line. But speaking of gags... I was little disappointed because there was such a lovely opportunity that umm... didn't happen. See, Courtney was there prancing around in her cute little socks and I was hoping she will make little Sasha suck on her foot, socked or bare, it matters not. Wouldn't it be a lovely gag for Twerp to ponder on? I know, I should be reviewing the story instead of adding my own fantasy to it but I just couldn't help myself. Lets go back to the review, shall we? The expandable gag was an excellent choice indeed. I loved Sasha's suffering and fear and being sexually stimulated at the same time. But on the other hand there is no explanation how Courtney had learned to use that gag. I mean it's a fairly complex thing to use and God knows I'm pretty hopeless when I have to pump up my bicycle tires. Has Courtney experience the gag on herself beforehand? Was she shown the limits of expansion by her mother and was she instructed on its technical operation? This are the things we are left to wonder about but they are still minor omissions compared to the entire chapter which in its entirety is a masterpiece of erotic and creative writing. |
