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Reviews for I Thought We were Going Camping.. Not Sex!, Part 1 martin 06/17/07 Aww man thats awsome. i wouldlike to read more. Lowlife 01/14/06 Uncomfortable reading but captures the unpleasant brutality well; I'll need a breather before the next part Christopher 01/12/06 Great story! I especially liked the end of the story where you set it up to be continued by having the boy tell his mother about the strange things he heard his uncle say. Verryevil 01/12/06 Awesome story, I love it. Blackrose 01/12/06 Lancer, I truly enjoyed your story (I Thought We Were Going Camping...). The detail and length of prose is just what I am looking for. I do not find it with other authors. Please write more. I will be very interested and will be watching. Laura 01/12/06 Wow, great story!!! i love how Uncle Elliot talks to them, it's so obscene to call little girls baby cunts to their faces! While i would certainly be disappointed if a story such as this didn't have brutal intercourse, the parts i find most arounsing are the humilation and mild pain as well as the ongoing, personal relationship involved. An impersonal rape is never as exciting to me as when love is involved. To that end, i would really like to see Daddy get involved, but if that doesn't work with what you have in mind that's good too. At least they have a continuing relationship with Uncle Elliot and the shame involved in keeping that a secret. i love it when a Dad, Uncle or similar close male does obscene things to a little girl while acting loving at the same time. Like saying lewd things in a sweet voice (as you had Elliot do) or holding her tenderly in his lap, telling her how much Daddy loves his little girl while sliding his fingers into her panties or mouth. Anyway, fantastic story!!! i wish these kind weren't so hard to find, i know they turn so many on. Please, please, continue it!!! :) Thanks, Laura |
