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Spike

05/31/06

This story was pretty good but I do not know if I would use the clippers to remove all the tomboys hair. For her I would keep the long pony tail for something to grab onto while you go up the girls butt. or aybe have pussycat grab her pony tail close to her scalp and twist it so much she yells in pain while someone goes up her butt, and Angie wks on her vaginia. There is just so much fun you can have with a girl with long hair, and so much pain you can give her with it. So keep the tomboys long haired pony tail, and have fun with her causing her pain. I have a good ame for te tomboy Kelly. I dated a girl named Kelly once and fund out she was not nice. So I went out with her best friend who was a tomboy because she looked like Sarah Baker on cheaper by the dozen but Katie was pretty cool.

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Reader

05/02/06

A little short, and not enough bondage. But headshaving as punishment is unusual enough and rates at least an extra star.

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Shakey Psyche

05/02/06

Well done. A thoughly enjoyable story. Hope to hear more.