Reviews for Tommy Takes Charge of the Olsen Twins, Part 12


Stephen

11/17/06 (5 Stars)

I have read most of your work, and hope you come back to Tommy in the near future.


Great Olsen Twins story

11/16/06 (5 Stars)

Kenna I loved every depraved minute of your Olsen story. Fantastic plot and delivery. The use of their parents in it and the strapon fuck between the twins was very arousing. This story was well written and entertaining from start to finish.

I have a request for another Olsen Twins story, this one involving the entire family in an incestual romp. Mr and Mrs Olsen, younger sister Lizzie, older brother Trent, hey even throw in the family dog. I was thinking maybe something along the lines of Mr Olsen’s built up sexual frustration for his 14 year old developing twins. Him all of a sudden realizing his pent up lust for them and the need to deflower them. Their constant teasing outfits and goodie/goodie nature must have blue-balled him. I’m thinking maybe he eventually decides to concoct a hypnotizing plan for a family fuck of his prissy rich stuck up daughters.

P.s. I loved your twisted use of the pure innocent family turning so filthy horny for each other. Please let there be another. Thanks!


John

10/18/06 (5 Stars)

This series of stories is great. I hope the author continues writing about the adventures of Tommy and Paul. Looking forward to the next installment.


Joonas

10/16/06 (5 Stars)

I must say that this is one of the best stories I´ve ever read.
I really hope you will keep those "Tommy takes charge of..." coming.