Reviews for Brotherly Love, Part 6

09/28/06

sooo realistic...I imagine.
Great as long as it's emphasized that this is a fiction like "Lolita", the classic book.

simone

01/03/06

I shod a tear when i got to the end of this chapter.

09/04/05

This has to be one of the best stories I've read on this site. What I like is that it isn't the usual story of some innocent girl being attacted by an adult. You take time to let us really get to know Tyler and Emma. I love how you have written Emma. I still see her as an innocent young girl. I worry about Tyler. He seems to sincerely to care for his sister, but at times forgets it is a game. I worry about where this story could head because of the uncle characters at the mall. They are using both Tyler and Emma and obviously they could get nasty. I hope we have a happy ending. It is the first story that I've read that actually made incest seem correct and more like love than lust. No matter what direction you take, the first chapters have been great.