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Reviews for Brotherly Love, Part 1 Emilye 05/26/07 Very sensual. Anony 04/18/06 Needs more sex. I wasn't getting thrilled by the same thing of being tied up. Bill Rose 12/15/05 I found this to be a most "edge of the seat holding " story and could not let it go without reading the whole story to it's finish. I look forward to being able to read more of your stories and most of all the finish of this one. Please don't keep us in suspence any longer. I have had so many things go through my mind and I find this so exciding as did Tyler's sister. Myself, I am sort of a dreamer who is older and now lives most of his life in a fantacy and it is stories like this that keep me on edge, a most welcomed edge I must say, Thank You so very much for giving me back some more of my dreams. 10/17/05 Tyler is quite eloquent for an 11 year old. The story has excellent flow and anticipation. joline 09/05/05 marvellous story. your story conjures lovely pics up when I was a little girl. Great writing. Whizbang 09/01/05 I like this one nice and gentle I am looking forward to the next one. DoktorSP 09/01/05 This is excellent writing. It's well thought out, it maintains a sort of extended tease. The bondage is realistic to the point that it makes me believe the author has some personal experience. I do hope future chapters start to tease less and get more explicit, but I'm looking forward to them in any form. |
