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Reviews for The Summer I Built My Character, Part 2 Polaris 05/11/07 I just finished reading both parts of your deliciously manipulative story, and loved it! (well, to be more specific, I've just completed an orgasm from said story). It was peppered with so many erotic details! I really hope that you will continue this story, as I am greatly anticipating a third installment. Jane 02/28/07 I''m too aroused to say much.... please write more soon... I loved the bicyble ride masturbation in the beginnning. Your descriptions are wonderfull.... now back to my ping pong paddle........ Aaahhhhhhhhhh.... xoxo carlbruce 09/14/06 Jill just came off as being sadistic and cruel. Kellie was a helpless tortured victim. Coye 09/08/06 Once again you have written a fantastic story. I truly hope you continue to write stories using your past experience. I read your first story and it struck me as 100% truthful. This time around I suspect you have revealed that your childhood experience is really what happened to Kelli. Either way I have enjoyed your writing immensely and I truly hope you keep relating your childhood memories to all of readers. My childhood experiences were similar to yours (except mine occurred with adults), and it is nice to be able to relate to such an excellent author. Thanks for writing, Coye! The King 08/18/06 I loved this story.. It was a very sweet story and wonder if Jill ever reached her goals. 05/06/06 love it! 04/19/06 This is one of the best stories I have seen on this forum. Please, please, please continue writing. I am very much looking forward to reading if you achieved your two goals and how it all goes. Pompano Pete 04/18/06 After you finish this story, what will you use for inspiration in the future? One small flaw - Kelli has no personality. She sobs, she cries, and that's about it. Kelli has no depth, never speaks and doesn't resist. No young child would ever act that way. None the less, an extremely good first effort. Keep the stories coming. |
