Reviews for The Summer I Built My Character, Part 1 Jane 02/28/07 Incredible hot story slowly building… intense… it had me trembling as she realized how excited she was rubbing the handle of the paddle between her crack….. I am moving on to the next chapter…. Shaking and excited I hope this story never ends …. Jane Coye 09/08/06 This is by far some of the best writing I have ever came upon. For someone who claims not to be a writer, this story belies that fact. It has a wonderful blend of fact and eroticism. I would truly love to publish my diaries if I could put pen to paper as well as this author. This is obviously a true story or we are dealing with one of the all time great fiction writers. Thanks for an exciting, erotica portrayal of the beginning of your sexual being. Coye Syzygy 07/13/06 Loved it. I HOPE you write more. I would love to read. Am really into doggy sex. See if you can pull something together and notify me. I want to read it. Love your style. Very good Jada 04/07/06 Very good story! Please keep them coming. Bear 04/01/06 Super story. Would like to come with you in contact. Olivia 03/31/06 Loved your story! i realy hope you do decide to continue the series hopefully getting into some even more detailed scenes with jill and little kelli |