Reviews for Musical Captors, Part 7

09/02/07

I wanted to keep this short but I canÆt, and I know there are a dozen things IÆll forget to mention.
This clean story got dirty so smoothly I hardly noticed the change as I read. The progression was so natural. Colorful phrases like ôlove nestö, ôsoft downö and my favorite ôàshe felt ElaiÆs tummy flutter and kick like a thousand nervous butterflies were trying to break free.ö are so refreshing. Then the humor, AmandaÆs phrase ôshiny!ö from Firefly (I saw Serenity so I understand where itÆs from) and ôScott ... felt another painfully tight erection coming on, as his dick fought to break free of his pants and destroy downtown Tokyo.ö another favorite.
Then thereÆs the reality of it. IÆve felt what thatÆs like, the tickle jones and how an erection takes all your upper-level brain functions and leaves you in a horny haze. You really know your stuff.
Then thereÆs the dynamics of the relationships and the surprise elements. Characters we can identify with, I mean, I so hope things work out for Jill. I was reluctant to admit it but after reading this story and ôSending a Messageö a few times, I have a big crush on your lead girl, sheÆs that three-dimensional. Both stories are emotionally sensitive and thatÆs very different on a site like this. YouÆre one of the few gifted writers in our little corner of the ænet.
The only grievance I have is that the ôto be continuedö is over a year and a half old. If youÆre willing and able, I implore you to continue. I know IÆm not the only one waiting, IÆm just the only one who ainÆt too proud to beg. Come back, Jill!