Reviews for Linda and Bethany, Part 1


Christie

08/27/07 (4 Stars)

Don't stop now. This is a terrific story that can go much, much further with lots of wonderful and exciting activities. Am sure many, many of us would love to see Linda become so much in love that she becomes submissive to the girls and eventually their slut slave, however, the little girls imagination become more and more demanding making Linda regret her situation.


Helena

06/22/07 (4 Stars)

Great Erotica storie mmmmmmm
hanks for sharing
Helena


teecee

12/12/06 (4 Stars)

great story, building up to a climax?
More S& M in folowing episodes please including lots of cunt-whipping, ws and scat- the girls should behave Masochistic en begging for more pain...


pigasus

12/12/06 (4 Stars)

Great story. Very well written and paced. Pity about scat, I find it a complete turn off. Would have given you 5 stars if it had'nt been there. I appreciate good writing g. You have done well.