Reviews for Karl and Jhoon's Vacation, Part 1

red rocket

12/14/05 (4 Stars)

good but use more force and torture. have karl do somthing out of character to hurt the buy an suprise the reader.

alphonse

12/13/05 (5 Stars)

I love the story I would love to have been Jhoon but the chance never occurred. I've always had to be proper and now I read kind stories of tieup and tickle torture like yours and just wish tha I could have someone make me wriggle and tell them of my dirty little fantasies then make me work my little stiffy till I came.

Excited reader

12/13/05 (4 Stars)

I give it four stars only because I got impatient waiting for the korean boy to get tied up. But if the rest of the story is as good as this, I may have to change it to five stars.