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Reviews for Karen's Torment, Part 1 Dave Dinmore 02/19/07 This story grabs you fast and hangs on. The victim is nice and young, adding to the erotic appeal, and the description and dialogue are very hot. I especially liked the woman's comment's to the man. Extremely hot. I found the idea of spanking the girl while she is drugged, bound and head covered to be a welcome and very arousing twist. I love the fact that a woman grabbed the child and is doing most of the action. It's also very sexy that she is making the girl ask for the ill-treatment. Calling the girl "sweetheart" is so erotically mocking. I love it. The idea of the two abductors being the abducted girl's "new mommy and daddy" is super sexy. I just hope that Ch.2 starts off with something like, She had no idea what the word "fuck" meant..." Great story! buttpluglover 12/06/06 gratuitous, one dimensional story. |
