Reviews for Lori

sanne

02/13/06 (5 Stars)

Incredible. Best ever. I would never had thought my fantasy stimulated to the point I just wished she would hang and orgasm and be done with.

Talon

12/21/05 (5 Stars)

Awesome!!!

ravier

11/19/05 (4 Stars)

You are a very strange man

Al

11/18/05 (5 Stars)

nice to see you posting stories again, I have been visiting your stories many times, and must admit that you and mr. Vauxhall writes about a subject that have my fully interest, so please go on hanging sweet little girl...in fantasy only of course!
bst wishes
Al

tim

10/28/05 (5 Stars)

very very good, need many more chapters...please continue

Scavenger

10/24/05 (3 Stars)

Very wordy. I don't like wordiness, and that is why I don't like many of Stephen King's books. Also, I feel a little cheated not to "see" at the way you've tied Meg. Somehow, I expected a little more, say, nudity. A little girl needs to be naked to be properly tied. I guess you'd say I'm a purist. Keep the stories comeing however.

Tom

10/24/05 (4 Stars)

Nice job. A little too talky in parts, though.

Whizbang

10/24/05 (5 Stars)

WOW! I wish I could find a girl like that. I like the way he gently brings her along. I can't wait to seewhat he does with Meg

Shakey Psyche

10/23/05 (3 Stars)

Not a bad story, just too much talking through the sexual parts. Keep at it, though. Shakey.

alex86

10/23/05 (5 Stars)

I loved this story and theme. I have always been partial to young girls being kidnapped and tied up by a male relative (particularly a big brother). Gagnbag does a good job of writing a good visual of the characters, their physical descriptions, and their feelings on being tied uo and tortured. The girls are the perfect age, wear the perfect outfits, and are treated perfectly by dear old dad.
The only suggestion I would make on improvement for part 2 (I pray that there will be a part 2) is that the dad also ties the daughter and her friend. I would also like the kidnap game theme to be more predomonant and maybe have the girls start to show fear and regrets over being involved in this game. Also I would like a camera to be introduced into the story and have the dad forcing the girls to pose for bondage photos. Perhaps having one girl being forced to photograph the dad tying the other girl. (it could be done if the potographer girl has her hands bound in front.) Great work though. I really would like to read more from gagnbag.

JS

10/23/05 (5 Stars)

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!! Great to see you posting stories here again. I enjoyed your earlier stories and look forward to the continuation of this one, and many others. Can't wait to see what you do to both girls together!