The Guvnor

12/14/06

Fantastic! :)

Lircrowfall

03/31/06

A wonderful little tale! I love fairy tales, and they're not exploited enough as source material on this site. A few quick things: 1.) When she gets dressed, you have her donning latex pants, but while at the ball, you say "lycra" pants. I also would have liked a more lavish description of the ball. A little description of those 32 girls in bondage, and some description of the dress of the aristocrats who were there. Otherwise, you've got a great idea and you tell it excellently -- and with more than a touch of humor. Nice job.