Reviews for Developing Danielle, Part 1

BrnFry

01/08/06 (3 Stars)

Liked the story. Hope you are going to keep writing it. Great storyline.

XtremeInk

12/28/05 (5 Stars)

Very, very hot story. Love the attitude of Danielle. Great bondange description and action. A follow up chapter would be cool as well...

Oak

11/06/05 (5 Stars)

Wow, love this story.. Hope that you'll post chapter 2 very soon

donikka

08/01/05 (5 Stars)

YES - wonderful -- oh god you are horrible to stop it there!!!!!!! ahhhhhh

GsG

07/31/05 (5 Stars)

"Developing Danielle" (which could be subtitled Toddlers Are Flexible) opens with what turns out to be the end of the story. It hooks the reader right from the first sentence and takes him on the erotic rollercoaster of incest, bondage and sibling rivalry. The main appeal for me lies in the gradual escalation of four-year-old Danielle's "mistreatment" by her parents for simple fufilment of their own bondage fantasies. It is arousing to read that they are not worried so much about hurting their little toddler as they are about maximising their pleasure. And when little Danielle's older sister enters the picture, the things are bound to turn hot which is symbolically presented to us by Danielle's unbuttoned PJ top. This single detail is probably the most erotic moment for me in the story as is the reason for it which turns out to be a little game between two sisters in which Danielle's nipples are played with by her older sibling.

"Developing Danielle" is dialogue driven and fast moving story. There is plenty of family dynamic to fill an episode of daytime soap opera which will probably satisfy most female readers like myself. But unlike episode of daytime TV, "Danielle" is never dumb or boring story. This is indeed one of rare stories which I'll remember for inspiring quotes like "anyone who plays with a four-year old's nipples while they're bound and gagged isn't going to be too worried about a woman playing with herself" and "we should honor her by worshipping her cuntlet and butt." It's clever, it's sexy and it's fun for the whole family!

Scavenger

07/30/05 (5 Stars)

Very enticing. I love the build up, and you left everyone hanging.