Reviews for Jenny: Trip to the Mall, Part 2


Verryevil

01/06/06 (4 Stars)

Nice work DVNT.
For some reason i get a feeling that the person entering the room in the end, just might not be her mother ;)

Keep em comming.

Verryevil


roman

01/05/06 (3 Stars)

Good story. I think the swim team should have been more involved with Jenny. Perhaps she could have been offered to them or better been the girl who gave her all to them.

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