Reviews for Kevin's Asswhipping, Part 2


John

07/11/06 (4 Stars)

great story, hope to see more chapters. the capitalization could use some work.


Rina

04/23/06 (3 Stars)

Continue please. Love seeing cute boys punished. And please add some ass-crack whipping to the mix, and some toys maybe.


jon

01/31/06 (4 Stars)

great stuff it would be awesome if the girl in the story could be forced to perform sexually as part of her punishments and if she too could be Daddy's assistant in punishing the boys. Mommy/Auntie needs to educate all four boys on hygene and sexual education and development however I would like to see Uncle use the boys against one anougher, some strong nc would be nice too. How about Auntie and Uncle hold a contest to see which of them can get the children to orgasm the most-then of course they could challenge each other to see which adult can cum up with the most inventive means to sexually torture and punish the naughty little youngun's. Also remember what the former First Lady said "it takes a village to raise a child...." go with that introduce the children to other guest adults getting into the punishment and sex with the children. The girl is the right age to babysit which would be awesome if her much younger charges could be with much reluctance introduced to Daddy and Mommy's upbringing techniques.

Other adults, situations, humilations could be brillantly brought into the story as it unfolds. Please keep writing great stuff


Anon

01/09/06 (5 Stars)

I love stories of extream family discipline. Hope to read about 10 year old Devin's punishment soon, and hope it wont be too long before Kevin gets to watch 14 year old Assia getting it too!
Shame there are no 'younger' girl characters though


John

01/08/06 (5 Stars)

Re: KEVIN'S ASSWHIPPING
I read parts 1 and 2 with great interest and hope learn more about the use of the martinet soon.
John


Anonymous

01/08/06 (3 Stars)

The story is pretty good, but it could be so much better without all the unnecessary capitalization of random words in every sentence.