OnlyMe
stefan_is_me_09@hotmail.com
05/27/07
FANTASTIC
I'm not a huge fan of poop-stuff... but I just love it when authors play with boys minds :)
I'd love to see you really expand on the idea of taking a totally innocent or unwilling boy and changing his mind about how he thinks about things. You did a great job in these stories, but I'd love to see more dialogue about it; actually showing us the boy forgetting past life things, and embracing the new.
Thanks for some great reading!
Ed
05/26/07
Well, there were some things I liked about this story, but I sure hope you're done with all the poop stories for now.