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Reviews for Boys Night In dave 02/14/07 how old is the girl????? 05/30/06 Loved both your stories- keep writing but damn could you double space! lol haagar 11/15/05 love your content, I'm hard as a rock, but please break it up into readable form. The Chrome Dinette 10/30/05 If this was broken into paragraphs I might have read more than 10 lines. Corner Ghost 10/20/05 I don't normally give a review, but unfortuantely I have to make a comment about the way this story is formatted. One block of words makes no sense at all, please put some line breaks in at some points it will make reading much easier - I'll probably get flamed for this but I wanted to make a point. Scavenger 10/20/05 Don't like the premise, poorly written, loaded with grammatical errors. |
