loquaz

09/22/06

great story I love it. But where is part 1?

Gracchus

09/21/06

There's precious little sex, bondage, or lolita in this story. The writer is building a very good sci-fi story and I read it with interest; it's as good as many short stories I've read. But this is "Lolita Bondage" and some readers may, unfortunately, pass this story by. I'd give it 4.5 stars for writing and storyline and probably less than two stars for subject interest. We'll settle for three. CornerGhost, keep writing. You are a very good writer.