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Reviews for Lessons Learned, Part 3 Dan 05/19/06 Despite typos and a lack of quotation marks to denote who was talking, it was quite the enjoyable read. Jeff Ludlow 12/02/05 this made me so wet! i dont mean to sound nasty but right now, i am soaked! i think you should do a cuntinuation though, where she calls her dad and he says it would be best if they didn't see eachother any more, she gets pissed and threatens to tell the police about the tapes, he says he'll love no matter what and to do that, and she says "no, you'll se me this weekend!" and hangs up the phone! than she calls her best friend, natalie, who is super hot, to come over to her house. then she tells natalie, what her dad did to her. and what she did to him, and asks natalie if she wants in to what she has planned. than they go to her dads house and knocks him out. and ties him up again. than her and natalie bang frank all weekend! but he fights back this time! and moves around so they cant make him penetrate them, and add lots of dialogue, like make suesann say "stop fighting daddy, or i will do this so long ill be sure to get pregnant!" and she'll be all like "daddy, i just want you to be happy, now stop fighting damnit!" and make her call him things like stupid son of a bitch! and call herself dady's little bitch! 09/30/05 OUTSTANDING and so exciting and fulfilling in every way...... great story!!!! |
