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Reviews for My Sex Child mr marks 05/22/06 I appreciate the comments about grammar and spelling but this is basically a good story. Clearly the writer is not a gifted linguist but his imagination is excellant. Maybe someone with superior writing skills and a little time could "translate" it for us. A disappointed reader 05/22/06 Could be an interesting enough story if it was actually readable. If you're going to actually write out a story rather than just fantasize it than at least go through the trouble to use proper grammar. Alexis 05/20/06 Can we say "run on sentences" boys and girls. babyNpop 05/20/06 One of the best stories I've read on your site. So fuckin'hot, had me jerking throughout. Author eally knows how to tell a story! Dan 05/19/06 This is awful. There are some good ideas here, but it's written so poorly I couldn't stand to go past the first section. Some spelling and paragraph breaks would be very welcome. The Chrome Dinette 05/19/06 very overrated at 1 star Scavenger 05/18/06 What do you call this? It is such poorly done, with grammatical errors so abundant that it is almost imposibble to read. Corner Ghost 05/18/06 Yes, it's a good story however it could do with splitting up into paragraphs for easier reading. I suggest you include more periods and comma's, less of the 'and' word. Mr. Grammar 05/18/06 ROFL |
