Reviews for The Old Man by the Sea, Part 1

Gracchus

07/02/06 (4 Stars)

Most stories need a sequel. This one SCREAMS for it! How does she help her friends get free? Is she able to free them at all? Does someone else find them and continue the captivity? If so, when? After they're freed from their restraints and trying to find clothes? Or does she continue where the old man left off, with the four remaining captives?

big dick daddy

06/22/06 (5 Stars)

you need to finish this, have the old guy wake up and continue with his sexual onslaught

Mike

01/16/06 (1 Star)

Ok... That was... Pretty dumb I got alot of comments: #1 You have got to hate kids your probably a phyco who has WAY to much time on his hands. #2 You made your characters stupid, if i was one of those kids (and you did say they were collared to tight to sit) I would just commit suicide by lifting my legs of the ground and letting gravity do its thing. I'm only 11 and i could think of 1 million ways to kill the old man. No offence, but your story was crappy.

Lilght

06/20/05 (5 Stars)

A great story - any chance you, or someone else could finish it?