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Reviews for Private Schooling alice aswood-derwent 05/13/07 Badly constructed story requiring editing. Too many spelling and grammatical mistakes. And a plot that has become so hackneyed as to bore to distraction. Score 1/10 or delta minus. Roger 12/01/06 Good story. Loved the descriptions of his stripping and feeling his young victim up prior to her being thrashed. I assume that "Miss Turner" also felt the headmaster's warth and equally hard cock! Bob Why 10/14/06 Too short....was also hoping that "Miss Turner" would get a little more involved. Other than that...pretty fair. ellen 09/20/06 A great story. Just enough detail to make it really stimulating. I just love young girls in white cotton panties and bra. Would love to read more describing how you disipline your young girls. 09/18/06 A very exciting story, a great pity it was so short. A more lenghty description in minute details of the victim and the adult,s equipement would have greatly enhanced the story....lovely 09/08/06 What an "exhausting" story......just lovely, Goldie Foxx 05/17/06 As all to often seems to happen with such stories there is such a long build up to a frustratingly breif climax. 9 paragraphs to get to the intent of the story then only 3 more to convey the whole point of the tale. A few lines of whipping followed by a few lines detailing the rape is too damn little. Reward the reader for picking your story by fucusing on what we want to know about. Pixie 05/17/06 Oh I guess he has done the last part of his job in a "suboptimal" manner if her face showing such terrible things. ("...that her last illusion about life had gone.") 05/15/06 Great story. Please continue it with a punishment enema. Tom 05/15/06 Short and sweet! |
