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Reviews for The Letter, Part 1 red rockect 12/21/05 please continue Brent 08/14/05 Super story, but add some punishment enemas as you continue. bear 08/06/05 I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters :) Platypus 07/27/05 Why not include some feet punishments especially for the older boys? Also whipping and caning and needles over the bellies and backs and legs -- not just ass punishments and genitalia straight bondage and electric shocks. Go for some originality! You can do it! Could produce a better story or series. Also spend a little bit more time on settings, characerization, and atmosphere in describing both villains and victims. Feel free to email me. Remember, feet punishments will add balance and depth to the mixture -- will improve overall quality and eroticism in this narrow but surprisingly popular sub-genre. Concentrate on the older boys -- pederasts don't usually become attracted to boys of younger than 11 -- and you called your villain character a pederast. Remember -- agony of the feet with older boys 11 and up. All suggestions -- not meant to criticize! jj 07/26/05 Keep it going. Lots of nipple torture tickling to the 12-13 yr old boys. donikka 07/26/05 yes please!! please write more!!! |
