Reviews for The Family Visit


cuckold wimp john

04/21/07 (5 Stars)

Hi - I write stories also, but your story here is the very best I have ever read! It is fabulous!


timtamperv

03/14/07 (5 Stars)

excellent story


J J Guerrero

12/10/06 (5 Stars)

I loved the story and came while reading it. A pity the old man didn't rape the boy's ass. I love stories of fucking lil boy's ass. Especially if they cry...


anon

11/10/06 (5 Stars)

great job, ignore the last guy scat is VERY sexual infact include more and have more featuring Patsy


John Stubbs

10/22/06 (5 Stars)

Hi great story i hope you post more like it.


Jim M.

10/21/06 (4 Stars)

Interesting story, well vwritten. I hope there is a chapter 2 in the future


JAG

10/20/06 (2 Stars)

would be a "5" if the last paragraph was eliminated. Scat is NOT sexual!!