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Suzy's Reader CommentsHere is a selection of some of the nice, and not so nice comments made by my readers and browsers. Even if you don't see your remark posted, please know that ALL of your feedback is read and appreciated! For anybody who wishes to comment on my writing, please use the feedback form at the bottom of each story. Babysitters Extraordinary Service I just wanted to tell you what a great job you did on this story. I found
your site today and this lesbian and bisexual stuff is great. I cummed all
over my pants while reading this story. You did a great job and this is a
great site. My cunt is dripping wet!!!! The "ignorant husbands" bit tainted the whole thing. I've have the same
problem with those who try to promote their religion but need to slam
other faiths. My reply: In the case above, the full quote should read, "--with loving but ignorant husbands--". Implying that the character didn't have a problem with her husband, but that he was, in fact, IGNORANT of what was taking place between the two main characters. And fellas--ignorant does NOT mean stupid. It just means unaware. Verrrrry nice. More watersports stories would be great! Please, stop teasing us and continue with all of the sordid details of
Anne and Nancy And Darlene spraying hot pee on themselves and hopefully
others as well! I had my hand inside my panties before I was half way through... Keep
writing Stunning! All I can say is "Oh, God!" I just finished reading Anne Rice, the Reclaiming of Sleeping Beauty and
your Mary story, is so much better! What a fucking hack...take a creative writing course
That suburbia sex piece was so thrilling, so…Thank you... Your use of meticulous details and plenty of dialogue help me create a
vivid picture in my mind. It was almost like watching a movie. The entire story, all 13 chapters (parts) thrilled me to the very core...How
deeply I envied the submissive! <sigh> Jesus, Suzy. That was unbelievable! I just wanted to tell you how much I truly enjoyed your story. It explored
many, if not all, of my fantasies, introduced me to new ones, and informed
me of others. The writing was so awesome that at times I forgot I was
reading a erotic novel. I really like the speed and your progression, It's just too hot wheeew! I fingered myself to four orgasms...in the ladies at work...That was so
hot! I just read your story....F____ by Mary. I thought it was wonderful. You
write so very well. No...it's not too graphic...it was just fine. Just
wanted to let you know how much I loved it. Please keep writing...as it
excited me very very much. Hell, it turned me on! A nice gentle story... Very well written as are all of yours are. I read it from top to bottom
which is unusual for me (I am not sure if that is good or bad). But it was
provocative and enjoyable reading... Wonderful story... My 61 yr old cunt is soaked. This was soooooooo funny!!!!I must tell you I was laughing so much I had tears!!Well written. I must tell my friends to read this....Thanks for lifting up my day!! Now back to work !! What a great break!! Thanks!! Finally...a breath of honesty where contrived exaggeration usually prevails.
You really fooled me with this one, but the results are closer to truth than most would
believe. Well done !! Thank you for your honesty. It was refreshing; rather than give it another fantasy, you
told a real story with your emotions. Those alone are a turn-on; the mind is truly the
biggest sexual organ. From top to bottom again! My god you can write your ass off, mamma...your
shit makes me think, so I guess that's a good thing. You go, girl! My feelings are mixed. That rang so true, I met so many... Congratulations! Well written and sincere. The rating isn't very applicable
for this story but I pretend I had (an orgasm) thanks for your story Thanks for the time you take to write. Great story,
reminds me of the early days of AOL when there were no pics. I am sure we
all have those "horror" stories of meeting the "creature from hell". Well
brought back some funny memories. Thanks again. With a lack of sexual scenes ... and no sex in the end to make up for her
let down, the story seems a tragedy. My Reply: This story is a "tragedy", but that's what the intent was. This is most likely the ONLY non-fiction I will ever make public in a story with regards to my sexuality. Very descriptive and deliciously naughty!! OMG!!!!! What a fucking HOT story!!! Wow. So nasty and depraved. I LOVED
IT! I couldn't make it thru the whole thing without exploding, so I came
twice! I started masturbating as I read it. I wasn't going to
cum, but about half way thru, I felt my orgasm beginning and the semen
rushing up through my penis. Awesome. What a way to start the day. Excellent character development/description - almost Hemingway-esque in
style. Thank you. ...and here was me thinking I was the only one who liked hard dykes... Suzy, your stories just do it for me. God I love them. Pissing on Patti was too much. Keep up the good work, there are loads of us here
secretly wanting to be used. kisses, Great story -- just the right combo of humor and eroticism! I'm a married 31 yrs old woman.... a femme I think...but
I dream of being dominated by another woman... thank you for your
story.... the pure sex really turned me on. GREAT!! JUST GREAT!!...and funny as hell. I read your story and just had to say this... "The bar was creepy as hell: bad pick-up lines blended with cheap perfume and cheaper, fruity cologne to create an atmosphere of suburban desperation and broken, white-picket-fence dreams." ...great fucking line! Your story really turned me on and I got extremely horny
imagining myself in Patty's place. Damn! that was hot. More! So when are you going to tell the author that we really should try this at
home? Great tale Porky Puss. My Reply: Whenever your piss tastes like lobster tail dipped in clarified butter...now quit replying to my stories at this email address :-D I just wanted to tell you I loved the story soo much. My ex is a very masc dyke, much like yourself, and I called her daddy all the time and I definatly miss daddy's dick...and I love piss in my mouth. Keep up the good story writing, from a daddy's dick craving, piss lovin' femme. - blkkatluvr - Oh my god....that was one tof the best damn stories I've ever read! As a
black bi female, I kinda started getting upset at the descriptions of Shi
and her body...but as I continue reading, I understood how it "fit in" in
the story....I'm a college student, and I'm going to go pleasure myself as
soon as class is over...Please continue to write these great stories.... OMG, this was wonderful, my pussy will stay wet from this
story forever. Damn I want a woman like Shiandra to fuck me. damn. I am a huge new fan!!!...I just wanted to say thanks for managing to hit
up most of my major fetishes in a wonderfully kinky and fun way. I love
the Daddi stories most of all, or maybe the watersports ones (it's too
hard to decide), but I can name my all time fav of your erotica, and
that's "Punished for My Sins"... Oh God, please tell me this is real!
I love stories with a military theme and or guilt denial and shame....the
story of my life! This story completes me. It describes my complete surrender and need to be unconditinally loved- Anon - Oh, this is just luscious. Too, too delicious for words.- Anon - Lovely story, I'm sooo wet!! GAWD! This by far one of the most thrilling, and genuinely titillating
stories I have yet to read! I read your story "spoilt no more" again today and thought the least I
could do was thank you. I am a closet submissive, married, unhappy, but
thrill to the notions and themes of your wonderful missive. Wish I could
meet someone like Mummy to control me. I will remain aroused all day Your story was dreamy, loving, beautiful, and powerfully
arousing. You don't know how rare an experience that is. Thank you
for this great story. In a world of unpleasant, and unnecessary brutality
it made my day. Oh god you did it again... I'm dripping. That was one rough story! Thanks for writing. I've felt like that Heather, sitting on that other side
of the fence listening in on everything and getting all hot and worked up,
only to rush to my bedroom and... Just wanted to tell you that I loved the story. I am a
semi-butch who is into bodybuilding. My friend, Pam...is very butch...
In fact, I downloaded it and brought it over to her apartment and we had a
magnificent interlude. Thank you, love. First time I ever called her
Daddy!!! This is the dream I have every night now! I have a
very small pussy (two fingers hurt), but I dream of a Daddy or Boi that
would use me. Please write more like this Daddy!! I LOVED your story!! I think I even loved more how it didn't actually get
explicit, it stayed slightly romantic, silly and horny without getting too
explicit. Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeat storyyyyy... I want more...you are very gifted
storyteller.
Ciao, and a huge thanks to all those of yinse that comment. Don't forget to keep rubbin' out those moaners,
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General Web Site/Writing Comments I am so impressed. I've downloaded all your
stories (ha, I use up a LOT jilling myself to sleep most nights!). AND, your
site is so well done. Interesting, easy to navigate, and shows your pixieish
side and sense of humor. As a tech writer (with not much creativity), I am
so impressed with all you are doing. I'm such a fan of your writing...and your web site, that
I just have to send you a note of appreciation. I'm still working my way
through all the stories on your web site, but from the ones I've seen so
far, I just want to applaud your writing talent...and your deliciously
perverse imagination! Just wanted to drop you a big wet thanks. I'm
sopping wet at work! I just wanted to drop you a line and thank you for the stories you have written. As I am a bi-woman [... Um.. I think so anyway!], I find your literature exciting and provocative, and oh so desirable. Ok.. back to reality.. kids, mortgages, hubby and
dinner! hi, I am a fan of your stories and love to
masturbate while reading them. I just wanted to thank you for giving
me and my girlfriend so much pleasure. love, You should write a book! You have a flare for words. You have an incredible and hot imagination.
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