Reviews of stories on mcstories.com, The
Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Filtered by: mf ff inc.
The reviews are based on my tastes, which you may know from my
stories.
| Title | Overall Rating (1-10) |
Ff inc | ff inc | Notes |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Cindy’s New Program | ||||
| The Coffeehouse Quintet | 5 | Y | Well written, but too psychologically twisted for me. | |
| Cold Fire | 7 | Y | Vampire horror; but pretty good family inc. | |
| Colonization | 6 | Y | Alien tentacles. Well written, but the inc sex is not a large part. | |
| The Coming | 4 | Y | Dark sci-fi. Violent. | |
| Consciousness Revealed | 6 | Y | Y | Ceasar. His style, too much mF inc. |
| Control Software | 4 | Y | Y | Dry and mechanical, negative language, but OK Ff. |
| Crimson Contact | 3 | No actual inc, although interestingly bizarre concept. | ||
| Curious Curios: The Panties | 2 | No inc or ff. | ||
| Damn Drawings! | 5 | Y | Short, mostly talk. The Ff inc is barely there. | |
| Dark Magic | 6 | Y | Poor writing, too quick scenes, but a decent Ff and bro-sis. | |
| Dating Service | 2 | Can barely find any inc, let alone ff. | ||
| Day of Jake | 5 | The inc is only mf, but all the ff and nasty anal makes it a nice story anyway. | ||
| Demonette | 3 | Creepy, no ff inc | ||
| Dog Day Afternoon | 4 | Y | Strange, short, barely brief ff inc. | |
| Dramatic Saga of Peter Q. Kleeshay | 5 | ? | Y | Long, witty, even funny, multi-genre, but too long between action, and the inc is barely there. |
| Eat Me, Drink Me, Love Me | 6 | Y | Dense fantasy style, well written, ok ff inc. | |
| Encyclopedia | 7 | Y | Nice, gentle. Ff is only mentioned in passing at the end. | |
| Eroticon Virus | 8 | Y | Y | Good writing, slow pacing, but very little inc. |
| European Vacation | 4 | Y | Pleasant hypnosis story, but just barely a bit of FF inc at the end. | |
| Experimental Interface | 2 | ? | Long-winded scifi, there might be sex in there somewhere. | |
| The Family | 2 | Mdom in an unpleasant way, no FF. | ||
| Family Fun | 4 | Y | Short, full of threats but not much follow-through. | |
| Flashes of Silver: A Garden Anthology | 3 | Y | A writing exercise, with a brief Ff | |
| Fred's Watch | 7 | Y | Rather abrupt writing, but it works, Ff inc right at the end. | |
| Girls and Their Best Friends | 5 | Y | Short, and only brief Ff inc right at the end. | |
| Gothic Lure | 2 | No ff inc. | ||
| Guess Who's Coming to Dinner | 8 | Y | Plenty of setup, then just one sex scene, but it's good. | |
| Happy Families | 7 | Y | Good little story, but the sex is at the end and far too short. | |
| Harlot Fever | 2 | ? | Weird setup with viruses, only sex seems to be f-dom. | |
| Hero of the Day | 1 | ? | Gave up, didn't find any sex. | |
| Holiday Wishes | 3 | Ok writing, but no ff. | ||
| Holy Shit!! | 8 | Y | Y | Dumb, so-so writing, but effective stroke. |
| Home Invasion | 8 | Y | Good, with the exception of vampiric blood-drinking. | |
| Hypnotist's Assistant | 5 | Nice story, long on the hypnosis, short on sex. The inc is only mf. | ||
| HypnoWho | 7 | Good story and writing, good Mf inc scene, but no ff inc. | ||
| I Bet... | 3 | Y | Cute, very short, no actual sex. | |
| Immersion | 4 | Y | Short, starts to get good then ends. | |
| Imparting the Endowment | 5 | Good story. But only Mf inc. | ||
| In My Mind a Horror | 1 | ? | Weird horror/fantasy genre. Didn't see any inc. | |
| In the Pink | 2 | ? | Only made it half-way, didn't find any inc. | |
| Infernal Destiny | ? | ? | Very long fantasy epic, skipped it. | |
| Interrogation | 2 | ? | All talk, no actual sex. | |
| It's Funny | 7 | Y | Good, and very good scene by part 4/4. | |
| Judy & the Pussies | 4 | Y | Silly, and not much sex. | |
| Legend of Mystania | 2 | ? | Nice enough fantasy story, but after 50,000 words and no inc, I gave up. | |
| Life: The Gorland Edition | 1 | ? | Stopped reading at the scat. | |
| Little Taste of Me | 7 | Y | By Ceasar, good as usual, even though the inc just adult sisters. | |
| Lustful Thoughts | 5 | Y | Long, and moves very slowly, some weird kink like fake snakes. | |
| Magic Words | 4 | Y | It's OK. But the ff is just adult sisters. | |
| Makin Changes | 6 | Y | Starts getting good by the last chapter. | |
| Man of the House | 2 | Long and rambling and no ff inc. | ||
| Master PC: The Eclectic's Edition -- A Birthday | 2 | There is no inc - not much sex either. | ||
| Master PC: Two For Tango | 5 | Y | The sex is OK but too brief. | |
| Master PC: Version 2.0 | 2 | Short and dumb. | ||
| Mental Pills | 4 | Short and silly, no ff inc, and not much mf either. | ||
| Mesmer's Daughters | 6 | Y | Y | The sex is brief, with just one good point in the second chapter. |
| A Mind Control Story in Mongolia | 2 | Poor writing, too much mF inc, and no ff. | ||
| Mona's Makeover | 5 | Y | Sorta hot in parts, but also quite creepy and nasty in others. | |
| The Monkey's Penis | 1 | Jumbled and silly, too much shouting and changing narrator. Couldn't read far enough to see if there if ff inc or not. | ||
| Mrs Scott's Triumph | 2 | Short and strange. No ff inc. | ||
| Mystania: Crimson Tempest | 1 | Weird SF/fantasy premise. After 15,000 words and no sex, I gave up. | ||
| No Two Are Alike | 4 | Great premise, interesting gothy clothes. But no ff or inc. | ||
| Nobody Loves You Like Family | 4 | OK hypnosis story, but there's no ff. | ||
| The Nude Models | 6 | Y | Quite nice, well written, finally gets to the inc at the end. | |
| Ode to Demonic Joy | 4 | Nice enough story of nuns and a demon, but no inc. | ||
| Oral Sedation Dentistry | 6 | Y | Nice. The Ff is just kissing and touching, but it's a fun short story. | |
| The Origin of Hootersville, USA | 5 | Y | Cute, short and silly. | |
| Pain For Power | 4 | Y | The inc is aunt-niece. Writing is OK, but it's psychologically dark and disturbing, not my thing. | |
| Pandora's Box | 5 | Y | Sorta ff inc, because they're all children of Zeus. I guess. Well written. | |
| Passion Grades | 4 | Slow build, well written, but no real inc. | ||
| The Power | 7 | Y | Long, 11 parts. Good Ff inc, in parts 6-8, but too much mF inc for me overall. | |
| Prodigal Son | 4 | A little weird and confusing, hypnosis and too many characters. | ||
| Project Puppetmaster | 7 | Y | Only 1 part, but very promising. Well written Ff in first part. | |
| Queens: Four of a Kind | 5 | Y | OK in parts. The inc is just sisters. A little too mdom in part III. | |
| Relax, We're Family | 8 | Y | Y | Good, but too short. Hypnosis, mFff. |
| Retirement | 4 | Well written, but too much psychological mdom. | ||
| Risk Factor | 4 | Ho hum. Brief, mostly bro-sis, the sex itself is not described. | ||
| Room and Board | 3 | Brief, lots of hypnosis but basically no sex. | ||
| Second Best Sex | 6 | Y | Y | Brief and simple, but decent. Interesting premise. |
| Seed Eaters | 4 | Well written scifi/fantasy, but almost no inc. | ||
| The Seven | 8 | Y | Y | Original witchcraft premise. Writing is OK but dialogue in-line. Unfinished. |
| Seven Stones of Enchantment | 2 | Weird and awkward, could not even read far enough to find out if there is inc. | ||
| Shadow Play | 3 | Long, intellectual, witty, psychological, and nothing in it to push my buttons. | ||
| The Shame of Leviathan | 2 | ? | Unreadable. A thousand typos, weird fantasy themes.. | |
| She Always Wanted To Be a Movie Star | 2 | Kinda creepy, not very sexy. | ||
| She Pissed Off The Wrong Guy | 4 | Y | Iffy writing, a bit negative, the sex goes by too fast. | |
| Shortskirt Street | 5 | Y | Brief, a little confusing, obsessed with breast size. | |
| Shrink, Rapt | 5 | Starts slow, a little funny, the Ff-inc is barely mentioned in passing. | ||
| Sibling Rivalry | 4 | No inc. | ||
| Sidhe Magic | 6 | Only mf and mF inc, but a nice enough story. | ||
| Sis | 5 | Only mf inc, with slow buildup and no detail. | ||
| Sisterly Slavery | 1 | WTF? violent and no sex. | ||
| The Six Pills of Domination | 7 | Y | Long-winded, eccentric writing, psychologically complex, only a few hot parts. | |
| The Slave Pit | 7 | Y | Slow start, too much silly mdom, but finally one good Ff-inc in chapter 8. | |
| Snapped | 5 | Y | Had potential, but ends just as it's about to begin. | |
| Sock Cocket and Gussy Pirl | 5 | Y | Nicely written, long build-up, but almost no sex. | |
| Stonefish | 7 | Y | Y | Good, but a bit brutal on the mdom. Just one sex scene. |
| Stunning | 5 | No ff, despite claim. Writing is OK, but story seems very incomplete. | ||
| The Submission of Kim | 6 | Y | Awkward Phil-Phantom remake, poor writing, but plenty of kink. | |
| The Sweet Smell of Lust | 8 | Y | Y | Starts out great, but later chapters get bogged in negativity and mF inc. |
| A Tale of Mice and Men | 7 | Y | Y | Nice premise, but just too short and no dialog. |
| Teacher | 3 | All about using hypnosis and drugs, almost no sex, blah. | ||
| Thirteen | 4 | Y | Far too brief and succinct. | |
| Tim's Life | 7 | Y | Decent, but too much mF and not enough Ff. | |
| The Treatment (Umpire) | 3 | Long, no actual ff inc. | ||
| True Prophesy | 1 | Silly, too short, too nc. | ||
| Unlucky Seven | 2 | ? | Too jumbled to tell what's going on. | |
| Upper Body Conditioning | 1 | WTF, no inc. | ||
| Vegas Weekend | 5 | Y | A bit too mdom, and the Ff inc is kinda incidental. | |
| A Warlock's Toys | 3 | Y | Twins, but not too exciting. | |
| What Men Look For in Women | 6 | Y | Decent, but takes a long time to start going, and the Ff inc is really brief. | |
| What They Deserved | 4 | Decent, but short and no ff inc. | ||
| Whispers | 5 | Y | Nice, lots of leather, too short. | |
| WhoreMaker | 1 | WTF, no sex. | ||
| Whose Dreams | 8 | Y | Well written, ending right at the Ff inc. |