A Celestial Invitation - The Review

This story was written in response to the Celestial Review of DG's "Call of Desire." Read the story invitation in The Celestial Reviews 257. In a nutshell, DG's story is a sex story that occurs as the author is writing a sex story. Celeste's review of DG's story is a sex story that occurs as the reviewer is reviewing DG's sex story. Celeste then invited other writers to take her review as a starting point to further stories, sort of an extension to the story in the review of the story about a writer who has a sex adventure while writing a story.

Got it?

I recommend reading Celeste's The Review first. Not only does it stand as an excellent story in its own right, but the other stories make a hell of a lot more sense when you read Celeste's story/review first.

I also heartily recommend DG's story The Call of Desire, the story that started this mess. It is an excellent story, one of the very best you'll ever read.

Other story submissions:

• The Review, by Celeste
• The Review - Fighting Roses Corner, by Nick (the story that inspired the invitation)
• The Review 2 - The Bedrom Window, by SandMan
• The Review 3 - A Perfect Rose, by Taria
• Seat of Power, by Jay Croft
• Celeste's WD-40, by Poison Ivan (moi!)

My story is certainly the dumbest of the bunch, but I had some fun writing it.