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DANIEL

A short story by

NICOLAS TRAVERS

 

   The house lay at the end of a muddy, rutted track, buried in a mixture of woodland and heath, prosperous but isolated. Daniel stopped to inspect it. He was out on a scouting trip for his wife – a woman had telephoned her antique shop to ask whether she might be interested in buying some furniture.

   “Don’t pay a lot, we’ve got plenty of stock.” His wife had been in a commanding mood. “But I could do with some nice little bits, some china or glass.”

   Daniel had nodded. His wife treated him sometimes as though he were a half-wit. But he reckoned that he was just as good a judge of fine things as her, even better sometimes. He patted his hip pocket. He had a wallet filled with cash, and he would make up his own mind, and argue afterwards.

    He parked neatly under an oak, facing the house, and walked briskly to the front door. The woman might be watching him, and deals were often fashioned by first impressions.

   The bell seemed to ring for a long time, and then the door opened fractionally.

   Daniel smiled his best antique dealer smile. “I’ve come about the furniture. You spoke to my wife.”

   The door opened a little wider. A woman with light chestnut hair streaked with blonde and grey strands looked out at him. She was not old, perhaps ten years or so younger than himself, in her middle to late forties, a nnice looking woman. But she had tired shadows around her green eyes, and her face was lined. It was the face of a woman combating some kind of crisis.

   “You’d better come in.” Her voice was listless.

   Daniel followed her through a small hallway into a large room with picture windows looking out towards the woods. The furniture was comfortable, and had probably been expensive. But it hardly matched his wife’s ambition for a smart shop with upmarket appeal. But he also noted a few pieces of decent china in a display cabinet, and a couple of quite interesting watercolours on the walls, and the woman had set out some small bits of silver on a little occasional table.

    She took an armchair close to the picture window, plainly expecting him to seat himself on the sofa facing her.  But Daniel walked to the far end of the room instead. He knew it was a little discourteous, but he collected silver, and could never resist the metal’s white metallic glow.

   He picked up a model of a small Arab fishing dhow. It was set between a pair of little silver dishes perhaps made to hold sweetmeats, and a couple of little silver pillboxes.

   “You’ve got some nice pieces.” He stroked the metal gently. The boat was really very pretty.

   The woman smiled slightly. “They belonged to my husband.” Her voice made it plain that she was now on her own.

   “Belonged?” He echoed the word. The boat was really very pretty indeed. He had money to buy such a boat – at a reasonable price, of course.

    “He died at the beginning of the month.” Her voice was small, a faint cadence of sorrow. “The funeral was last week. I’m trying to clear as much as possible before I sell the house.” She hesitated. “But he was very fond of that boat. We stayed with some friends in Bahrain. They gave it to us as a present, and I don’t think he would have liked me to sell it.”

   Daniel sighed. The woman’s tone placed the small boat beyond his reach. Some things, the common artefacts of life, things acquired as everyday comforts and for the enhancement of everyday life, things bought merely to cushion and impress both owner and visitor, can be bought and sold easily. But there are other possessions that count as treasures, and treasures are only sold to stave off desperation.

   He walked around the room. The furniture was definitely not for the shop. But he wanted to let the woman down easily. There was something appealing about her, a frailness, a vulnerability, that made him want to comfort her. He glanced at her out of the corner of his eye. She must have been very pretty and vivacious once, before her grief, and she was still attractive. But now her fire barely smouldered.

   Curiosity pricked him, shaded with desire, but he quickly pushed both away. A man may comfort a bereaved woman from his heart. But any attempt to profit from grief can only rank as treachery.

   He sat on the sofa, searching his mind for a way to prolong their conversation, and cleared his throat. “I’m not sure our shop would be right for you.” He saw the woman’s mouth tighten a little in disappointment, and hurried on. “But perhaps we could buy something else from you. We might take your china, and any of your silver you don’t want to keep.” He hesitated for a moment. “And you might have some coins tucked away, if you have been abroad. I collect silver and coins. People often have a few tucked away.”

   He looked at her hopefully. Daniel had more than two and a half thousand coins, all carefully packed and graded and catalogued, and he was forever hunting, though not always successful.

   His words were a key. The woman’s face lit up. “My husband left a box of coins.” She spoke quickly, as though to hold him in place. “I don’t suppose that they are very valuable, but they might interest you.”

   She rose to her feet and hurried off, leaving Daniel to ponder. He felt increasingly attracted, but the woman’s grief made her taboo. He shrugged to himself. Life is a progression, an adventure, and the woman would recover in time, and perhaps need a friend, an admirer, a lover. He could be patient.

   She returned carrying a cigar box that rattled interestingly as she placed it on a glass-topped coffee table.

   He bent forward, and his fingers reached out impatiently. Coins held a special magic for him, even stronger than the power of silver. He began to fidget impatiently as she poured them from the box to spread them across the glass surface. She was taking too much time, her hands were in the way. He wanted to be amongst them, inspecting and sorting them.

   She withdrew, and he began to enjoy them. They were no very great treasure, some oddments of currency from trips to a dozen different countries, a few rather worn English silver coins, a dusting of old threepenny bits, a couple of Victorian farthings. He picked up an American silver dollar. It was not very valuable, but it was in decent condition and he did not have that particular year.

   “I think I’ll keep that one.”

    The woman’s voice broke in on his thinking. “My husband said it was valuable, and I think it is pretty.”

    Daniel looked up at her, and her eyes were full on his. He felt a surge of desire once again. Perhaps he wanted the coin, and felt cheated. Perhaps, and it was a strange thought, the woman wanted to put him by for a day when she would grieve less and need more. They looked at each other, and their eyes were a meeting, a coming together.

   Then she looked down. “Yes, I think I’ll keep it.” Her voice was thoughtful, as though she were speaking to herself. She paused. “At least for the time being.”

   Later, when she had packed some of her china and he had paid her, and also pocketed a little plastic bag for himself, they talked a little in a polite exchange of preparation for his leaving. Conversation made the woman more animated, and she even laughed at one point, in a little silvery bell of a sound, her eyes lighting with a spark that whilst it immediately faded, also painted a future day of renewal.

   Daniel rose to leave. He had an overwhelming urge to take this frailty and sadness and enfold it in his arms, to infuse the woman with a new zest for living. But he hesitated, and the moment, if there had been a moment outside of his imagination, passed. It was time for him to leave. He lingered, reluctant to go, and his lingering passed on into foolishness.

   The woman stood for a moment at the door to her house, and smiled again. Daniel knew that he must touch her, even if he made only the most mundane gesture of acquaintance. He held out his hand, and felt the woman’s fingers warm between his for a moment. Then he turned, and walked back to his car.

 

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